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Joan Crawford 3

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Image size
2093x2888px 1.16 MB
Make
OLYMPUS IMAGING CORP.
Model
SP510UZ
Shutter Speed
10/2500 second
Aperture
F/3.2
Focal Length
11 mm
ISO Speed
50
Date Taken
Mar 25, 2015, 7:14:30 PM
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Phew! Almost all of your portrait works have a constructive comment in them!
 So I kept searching for one that haven't received that comment yet.
The word I've got is "Person". You have quite a lot of realistic portraits in your gallery! And that makes me have a variety of choice to comment on.

You captured her face pretty well! The shape of the eyes, brows, hairstyle, etc. are just like those in the photo. The clear lines for the hair bring out the smooth, shiny texture. It shows that you had put much effort into this piece, seeing the bright parts are very clean and the dark parts have clearly arranged shadows. I really admire your skills!

I'm not very experienced in pencil sketching, so I'm not too sure. If I have to make a suggestion, I think maybe you can increase the contrast a little bit more? Like darken the eyebrows and the two ends of the hair more. I saw the photo and those two parts are really dark that they're almost black.

But anyway, this portrait is nicely done and I like it! You can now comment on 
 bluediscord's work. The tag word is "Memory". Good luck!